This is our very first rough cut! It is far from perfect and we need to do a lot more before it is complete. We need to add a soundtrack at the beginning, reshoot one shot and add the title sequence.
Marissa gave us some feedback, which was:
- to reduce the amount and length of the establishing shots as they don't do much for the opening.
- to add in another shot in between when Fabio is walking towards Liam of Fabio taking a seat. Preferably a mid shot.
We also need to film more conversation between Fabio and Liam because there is not enough and our opening only comes up just under 1 minute and 20 seconds.
We aim to finish these last bits up in Mondays three hour lesson!
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